The curious case of the half-eaten apple

Today was a special day. Radha was starting seventh grade – for the second time. He wasn’t upset. He didn’t think it proved his odd behaviour meant he was cracked in the head – even though his dadi had lamented the fact, loudly and repeatedly. In fact he didn’t even really understand why she thought he was odd. He was his mother’s favourite son (albeit she had only one) but if she thought he was fine, he was fine.

Anyways, what his dadi thought of him was of little concern. Radha was rather looking forward to this do-over. The first time around, he hadn’t understood a word of physics. But he was hoping this time, the concepts would make more sense. He was looking forward to math and hoping he’d be able to get Jyoti miss to like him this time. But what he was really looking forward to was meeting his most favourite teacher, the best of the best, chemistry teacher extraordinaire, Anjum miss, who not only liked him but spoke to him like he was clever.

And it was for her that he was carrying an apple. As an offering really with the sincere hope that seventh grade would treat him kindly.

Radha hid the apple at the bottom of his bag and checked his glow-in-the-dark watch. It had been a present from his father after he had come first in the lemon race. The hands read five minutes to 8; time enough to go to the washroom before everyone arrived and started to tease him for failing.

He returned to class 10 minutes later, drenched till the shoulders in water. No, no one had played a prank on him. He had gotten a little too carried away trying to get his hair to stand on end like he had seen in an ad. All the water had only served to flatten his hair to the scalp.

It served a purpose though, one he was equally happy and unhappy with. Instead of teasing him for failing, his classmates were teasing him for the state of his hair. But Radha brushed it off like his dada brushed off lint from his pajamas. He was in his secure bubble and nothing could penetrate it.

Shivering slightly, he walked to his desk, head held high. He discreetly put his hand into the bag to ensure the apple was safe. What he found instead was a half-eaten fruit, spoiling his newly covered notebooks and overused textbooks.

He sighed, disappointed that what he had feared had come to pass. Sometimes it was a curse really to be able to predict the future. He threw away the apple and wiped his books clean using his hands and pants.

Radha turned on his chair, looking at the class full of suspects. No one saw him but he saw everyone. Who had eaten his apple? More importantly, how had they found it? But most importantly, what was he going to give Anjum miss now?

He needn’t have worried though. As soon as miss entered the classroom, she gave him such a winning smile, the rest of his day passed peacefully enough. He couldn’t have asked for a more perfect start to his second seventh grade experience.


This is the first post in the series. To know more about Radha, click here.

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40 responses to “The curious case of the half-eaten apple”

  1. Love that you don’t mind ‘complex’ sentences while writing – I think they help in adding a lot of flavours to the plot too. Love this story for the sheer innocence…that only a child can have. But not easy to write about such a vulnerable character. Intrigued…

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    1. Thank you for the compliment Ashwini. Hope you enjoy the series 🙂

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  2. Finally have time in hand and what do I do first, rush to read tales of Radha. He such a an awesome lady. I LOVE him already
    Have read a couple of posts. Haven’t done justice to you or Radha yet.

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    1. Yay. Thank you for coming back! It makes me super happy.

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  3. Loved the humour in this one. I find Radha quite smart, and frankly, something of a child genius. Eccentric, intelligent , and otherwise a complete mis-fit. He does look like a Mini version of Holmes. Would he be able to figure out who ate the apple? (I already have a theory, since I read some of the later posts first.)

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    1. Haha! You just made me so happy with that comment! Someone is forming theories on a mystery that I am writing. I feel blessed. Thank you 🙂

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  4. This is going to be a very interesting tale Suchita…. already getting curious who ate the apple that too only half

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    1. Thanks Nidhi. Glad your enjoyed it.

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  5. That was a perfect beginning for the story. You described the protagonist quite well, and made him look quite the hero, although he is in reality just another lad. Great choice of words and some very witty lines.

    Amazing stuff!!

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    1. But that’s the thing – aren’t we the heroes of our tales? Glad you liked it 🙂

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    pratikshya2

    I was reminded of the DD series Swami and Friends. Radha has such sweet innocence of childhood. Simple yet endearing. I could almost watch the lean boy trying to style his hair with water. 😃

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    1. Haha thank you. When you put it like that 😊

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  7. Lavanya Avatar

    You have created a quite nice sequence of events. Looking forward to more Radha writes!

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    1. Thanks Lavanya.

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  8. wowparenting.com Avatar
    wowparenting.com

    O for once i thought radha is a girl. Nice descriptive story. Had the sequence running in my head while reading .

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    1. It is actually an acronym for Rishidhar Arpita Dinanath Hose Agarwal. Glad you enjoyed it!

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    shwetadave

    Loved the start. Quite a few things left to imagination and the “hair set” got me smiling. After the theme reveal, this is just perfect. Was right in thinking this series will be one not to miss this month 🙂 Best wishes.

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    1. Thanks Shweta for your kind words. Means a lot. Hope you continue to enjoy Radha’s adventures.

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  10. I already like him! What a great personality!

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    1. Thank you. Radha likes you too

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  11. OMG! Radha and his adventures are just so crazy like any child of his age. I loved what he tried to do with his hair:) Curious enough to experiment. That’s a well written piece. Looking forward for his next adventure.

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    1. Thanks Medha. It’s a detail I remember from my school days and even from my students. They called it the ‘wet hair look’ 😂

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  12. I had loved the theme reveal and I love this post too. Great start Suchita and looking forward to seeing where this goes!

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    1. Thanks much Neha. I’m curious to know too! I’m making it up as I go along.

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  13. Radha sounds adorable and intriguing! Waiting to read his adventures!
    Super theme and post, Suchita!

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    1. Thanks Mayuri. Glad you enjoyed it!

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  14. I’d still like to know who ate that apple! Nice start to the story 🙂

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    1. Frankly I don’t know either!

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        Radhika Acharya

        That makes three of us who don’t know!!! 🙂 🙂

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      2. One of life’s many mysteries…

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  15. rashimital Avatar
    rashimital

    I liked Radha when I read your theme reveal for the challenge. This seems to be a good start, Suchita. Hope to follow Radha and his life daily. 🙂

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    1. Thank you Rashi. Hope you enjoy his adventures

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  16. Interesting start and I already like Radha😊 will be following as well.

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    1. Glad you enjoyed it.

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  17. Good start to the series, Suchita. You have a compelling protagonist here. I’ll be following the adventures of Radha.

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  18. SeemaMisra Avatar
    SeemaMisra

    Radha’s is quite an interesting character. Looking forward to his adventures …

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    1. Thanks Seema 🙂

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