Vol. 1 Issue #2: An old friend says hello

Spending her summer vacations at her dadiโ€™s was Gauriโ€™s favourite pastime. Growing up with an acerbic sense of humour meant she often felt or was made to feel like an outcast. No one understood her jokes and she hated dismissing her sarcasm as โ€˜itโ€™s just a joke.โ€™ Her dadi though not only understood her sense of humour but also participated which made spending time with her something she looked forward to.

There was a corner of her home Gauri loved. A table smack in the middle of the house where a huge collage of book quotes, book covers, inventory list, post-it notes, and other knickknacks formed a picture of ordered chaos, giving her a feeling of warmth and safety. The table had enough space to put her laptop and she could also keep an eye on the old woman from there. The two had found this gorgeously comfortable single sofa two months back on one of their lunch dates and Gauri was almost always planted on it.

She knew her dadi was old but it had never been brought home to her so jarringly than this visit. Her grandmother looked old, drawn and shrunk. She had started to look haggard and unsure on her feet. Full of quick remarks and snap rebukes, she hadnโ€™t even scolded Gauri for keeping her shoe-clad feet on the table. She desperately hoped dadi had not contracted one of those life-threatening diseases. They were still too young and had many more things to share before dadi could be allowed to go anywhere but the supermarket or the mall. She had even called her mother, threatening irrational things if she didnโ€™t tell Gauri what was wrong with dadi. That had served no purpose except to scare them and put them on the next flight home.

Gauri sighed through her morbid thoughts and shut her laptop with a snap. Her phone pinged and she cursed loudly. It was an email notification with the subject โ€˜Dear Lemon.โ€™ Thinking it must be from dadi as she was the only one who called her that she clicked on the email.

Sarla knew her granddaughter could sense her inner turmoil. She doubted Lemon knew the exact nature of the turmoil but she was smart, as Sarla was known to brag every chance she got, and she knew something was up. She wished she could tell her what was troubling her but she wantedโ€ฆno neededโ€ฆto protect her innocence for a few more precious days, because she knew it was only a matter of days.

So when she heard the horrified squeak from the middle of the house, she was transported back to the time when her namesake Sarla had made a similar squeak of terror just before she was killed by Abhor. Shaking slightly, her entire being preparing for a fight, she went to Lemon.

Seeing the girl on her feet, jaw quivering, looking here and there as if she couldnโ€™t quite believe where she was, all colour drained from Sarlaโ€™s face. Before approaching her granddaughter, before asking her what the problem was and before she could point a violently shaking finger to her phone that was kept upside down as if that would help her escape the terrible news she had got, Sarla knew that Abhor was alive, kicking and ready to make his presence felt. It had just never occurred to her that he would take this route to threaten her. But knowing him, didnโ€™t it make complete sense that he should attack the one person in Sarlaโ€™s life who she loved beyond anything else in this world?

โ€œBaby,โ€ she whispered. Her hands were raised and she was approaching her as if she was approaching a scared deer. โ€œLemonโ€ฆโ€

Gauri looked up and started again, this time for a wholly different reason. She couldnโ€™t believe her eyes. She went to rub them before realizing the woman in front of her wasnโ€™t a mirage and she wasnโ€™t hallucinating out of shock.

Sarla Devi looked transformed. Where she had looked old only moments before, she looked vital now, like she had shed eons of old skin and been reborn. โ€œLike a phoenix,โ€ she whispered.

โ€œWhat?โ€

โ€œWho is Abhor and why is he sending me an email?โ€ Cringing, she said, โ€œHe must be an old dude if he thinks people still send emails.โ€

She couldnโ€™t help it, Sarla laughed: a proper, full belly laugh. โ€œWhat’s in the email?โ€

Her grandmother’s laugh helped soothe her nerves. โ€œDadi whatโ€™s going on?โ€

Sarla had been right. Gauri was attuned. She knew the email wasnโ€™t an idle threat.

The more Gauri stared at her grandmother, the more changes she could observe. It was as if the transformation was still taking place, right in front of her eyes.

โ€œHave I told youโ€ฆโ€

โ€œIf you tell me youโ€™re a superhero my god I willโ€ฆโ€

Sarla choked. Then, โ€œWell Iโ€™m not a superhero per say but I do haveโ€ฆโ€

โ€œPlease donโ€™t say abilities…โ€

โ€œโ€ฆabilities. Lemon I am not pulling your leg.โ€

โ€œYou could be. You are old! I mean no offense but youโ€™re like a hundred and superheroes are supposed to beโ€ฆโ€ she let out a nervous laugh. The strangeness of the situation was so palpable that all she could do was laugh in short staccato bursts.

โ€œYes you have reminded me this, every day, almost twice an hour, that I am old,โ€ she snapped. โ€œBut it does not change the fact that I am immortal.โ€

โ€œYou are dying, isnโ€™t it? And all this is just a way to help me cope, right? Oh I am immortal, I will always loveโ€ฆโ€

Getting impatient and frankly angry, Sarla decided to go full throttle with her superpower.

โ€œDadi are you okay? Why are you screwing your face like that?โ€

Sarla went back to her stance. No need to panic, she told herself. You havenโ€™t used your powers in decades. They have become a little rusty. Need some engine oil, is all. She tried again.

โ€œDadi if this is your way of convincing โ€“ holy bejeesus ghost on the road โ€“ what is that?โ€

โ€œOkay, okay you got me. Turn it off, dadiโ€ฆpleaseโ€ฆokay please turn itโ€ฆdadi stop it youโ€™re freaking me out!โ€

Gauri found herself panting. The shock and power of what her grandmother had done was like pinpricks on her entire body. She would have exulted had she not been shaken to the core. Taking a deep breath she said, โ€œSo you are immortal and clearly you have someโ€ฆโ€ she gestured towards her vaguely.

โ€œYes.โ€

โ€œAnd there is another immortal out to get youโ€ฆha haโ€ฆof course.โ€

โ€œOf course.โ€

Gauri opened her mouth but then closed it. She knew dadiโ€™s patience was wearing thin. So she chose the next question carefully. โ€œWho is Abhor and what did you just do to me?โ€


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16 responses to “Vol. 1 Issue #2: An old friend says hello”

  1. Ok, you have me hooked. I am going to come back to complete the series.

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    1. Awe don’t you know how to make a writer feel happy. Thanks Anupriya!

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  2. Abhijit Ray Avatar
    Abhijit Ray

    Could not follow. Who is abhor? What is happening to dadi? Is this all dream or is this supernatural phenomenon?

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    1. Not a dream. Not even a supernatural phenomenon. Dadi is a superhero ๐Ÿ˜€

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  3. A good follow up to the first episode. This one’s pace was slow and I liked it as it helps bridge two faster paced episodes (I’m expecting the 3rd episode is going to be really fast paced!)

    PS: BTW, I feel like cuffing Gauri around her ears for her insolence ๐Ÿ˜›
    PPS: Not calling him Abhor. Tarak Suri for me. Like Voldy and Sauron, it’s the name that causes fear ๐Ÿ˜€

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    1. “Fear of a name increases fear of the thing itself.” ๐Ÿ˜›
      Yessss #3 is a lot more fast paced. I feel in 1&2 I was only trying to figure out how to begin. The actual story begins in #3

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  4. Ahh you got me.. waiting for you to reveal the suspense. Who is Abhor actually?
    #MyFriendAlexa #momlearningwithbaby #Blogchatter

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    1. Issue 3, which is published, will tell you more about Abhor ๐Ÿ˜‰

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  5. I love these reads which leave the story with an open end and it keeps you glued thinking about the character

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    1. Thanks Pooja. Now that I think of it, the whole story is a little open ended!

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  6. Preethi Venugopala Avatar
    Preethi Venugopala

    Interesting! Well written

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    1. Thanks for the compliment ๐Ÿ˜€

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  7. Very intriguing! The story pulled me in. Who Is Abhor, actually? ๐Ÿ™‚
    #DeepTiesReads #MyFriendAlexa

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    1. I’m glad you found it intriguing. He will be making a bigger appearance in issue 3 ๐Ÿ˜‰

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  8. anecdotesofmylife Avatar
    anecdotesofmylife

    That was a good read I must say but fantasy is just not my thing ๐Ÿ™‚
    #wordsmithkaurreads

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    1. Then I must doubly thank you for reading and commenting ๐Ÿ™‚

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