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Jadugar ka pitara

Jadugar, jadugar kya hai aapke pitare mein?
Bhandar hai chamatkaro ka, ao dikhata hoon.
Ek ungli, do ungli, teen ungli,
Dekhte raho ungliyo ko
Kahin gayab na ho jaye
Arey dekho ek gayi jeb mein
Doosri kha gaya sher
Teesri maang li bache ne pakadne ko
Dekha nahin ungliyo ko theek se aapne
Lo saari gayab ho gayi.

Jadugar, jadugar kya hai aapke pitare mein?
Bhandar hai chamatkaro ka, ek aur dikhata hoon.
Ye udi chidiya
Ye nikla khargosh
Ye bhaagi billi
Sab hai iss pitare mein
Bolne aye hai “namaste”
Pooch rahe hai karyakaram mazedar laga apko?

Jadugar, jadugar kya hai aapke pitare mein?
Bhandar hai chamatkaro ka, chalo teesra dikhata hoon.
Ankhein moondh lo aur gaur se suno
Mummy bula rahi hai ghar wapis
Unko bolo thoda ruke
Ek aakhri jaadu dikhata hoon
Chalo ek baar phir ankhein bandh
Aur paanch tak ginti karo
Ab ankein kholo aur dekho
Jadugar ke pitare mein hai jadugar
Aur pitara ho gaya gayab!

Le gaya who apne saath apni ungliya,
Apne sher, chidiya, khargosh aur billi.
Par chor gaya ek saral sandesh
Kabhi yaad aye
Kabhi neend na aye
Kabhi duniya ka bhaar lage bhaari
Toh bula lena wahi gana ga kar
Jadugar, jadugar kya hai aapke pitare mein?

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24 responses to “Jadugar ka pitara”

  1. Pr@Gun Avatar
    Pr@Gun

    बहुत खूब लिखा है, जादूगर और आपका जादू छा गया
    #PraGunReads #MyFriendAlexa #BlogChatter

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    1. Suchita Avatar
      Suchita

      आपका बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद

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  2. M AK Avatar
    M AK

    Nice poem…. though I would say the cat and the fool is still my favourite! 🙂

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    1. Suchita Avatar
      Suchita

      Haha well they serve different purposes but thank you 🙂

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  3. vidhya29 Avatar
    vidhya29

    this is amazIng! the title made me curious

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    1. Suchita Avatar
      Suchita

      Glad you liked it Vidhya 🙂

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  4. nooranandchawla Avatar
    nooranandchawla

    That’s amazing! I’m very impressed!

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  5. Rashi Roy Avatar
    Rashi Roy

    Nice one 😁 You can create poetry. Write more

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    1. Suchita Avatar
      Suchita

      Coming from a poet, that’s high praise. Thanks Rashi

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  6. Priyanka Nair Avatar
    Priyanka Nair

    Waah kya jaadu hai aapke shabo mein 🙂

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    1. Suchita Avatar
      Suchita

      Jadu toh muse ne kiya hai. Main toh sirf sidekick hoon

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      1. Priyanka Nair Avatar
        Priyanka Nair

        vo bhi important hai 🙂

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  7. Jyotirmoy Sarkar Avatar
    Jyotirmoy Sarkar

    your poem taken me down to the memory lane when for the first time in my childhood days i attended a show of a jadugar, i still cant forget it.

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    1. Suchita Avatar
      Suchita

      That’s so cool! The poem was inspired from a story – Mithaiwala – I read in school.

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  8. romagptasinha Avatar
    romagptasinha

    Hi Suchita here after a long time dear but really loved the flow of your myriad emotions in the weave.

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    1. Suchita Avatar
      Suchita

      Thanks Roma 🙂

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  9. Rashmi Avatar
    Rashmi

    Wow jaadugar! Acha jaadu kiya hai aapne🙂

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    1. Suchita Avatar
      Suchita

      Dhanyavad Rashmi

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  10. Abhijit Ray Avatar
    Abhijit Ray

    Nice try. Reads good. Give us more.

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    1. Suchita Avatar
      Suchita

      Hahaha thanks Abhijit. Filhaal itna hi. Maybe muse will indulge me again.

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  11. mommytincture Avatar
    mommytincture

    Have you written this? I am blown away. Hands down bow to you. I do not understand english peotry, but am fond of poetry in hindi. This one was so cool and deep rooted at the same time.

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    1. Suchita Avatar
      Suchita

      Hahaha I can’t believe it myself that I have written this but I have. Thank you so much!

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  12. Deepika Avatar
    Deepika

    Wow!The new version of your tale. I loved it. Jadugar Jadugar Kya hai aapke pirate mein?

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    1. Suchita Avatar
      Suchita

      Chamatkar hi chamatkar hai 😂

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