The promise

She entered her bedroom and heaved a sigh, eyes closed, picturing the feel of the cool sheets on her bed and what a relief it would be to climb into them. The past three hours had drained her mental and emotional resources and she was looking forward to a quiet night.

But there was a surprise waiting for her when she opened her eyes.

โ€œGah,โ€ she said unintelligibly, smacking her hand on her mouth to stop herself from making more loud noises. โ€œMother, what are you doing here?โ€

โ€œGeet what are you doing?โ€

She rolled her eyes and ignoring the pearly-white floating form of her mother, went into the bathroom to wash her face. Her mother, however, did not acknowledge the boundary of the closed door.

โ€œYou can hardly run away from me Geet.โ€

โ€œMother I need to pee. Do you mind?โ€

โ€œFine,โ€ she said reluctantly as she floated out of the closed door. She waited on the bed, not on her daughterโ€™s side obviously, she wasnโ€™t a monster.

She did not speak until Geet had settled into her bed and closed her eyes. โ€œWhat are you going to do about Romi?โ€

Groaning in defeat, Geet sat up and rested her back on the headboard. โ€œWhat do you mean?โ€ She refused to meet her mother’s eye.

โ€œGeetโ€ฆyou know exactly what I mean.โ€

โ€œDid you expect me turn her away?โ€

โ€œYou know itโ€™s not that simple,โ€ tutted her mother.

Huffing, she laid down again, adjusting her blanket. It was so horribly tangled between her legs, she had to get up and re-spread it. This time, she turned to face her mother who was glowing in the darkness. She did know what her mother was talking about.

Romiโ€ฆRomi was the person everyone loved, hovered around, complimented, and adored. They thought rainbows came out of her arse and ambrosia every time she opened her mouth. Geet knew she was sounding like a jealous younger sister but the truth was, Romi could do no wrong. She was a force of nature and had everyone wrapped around her perfectly manicured hands.

And then there was Geet. Nerdy, kind, quiet Geet who was dependable, responsible and too intelligent for her own shoes. No one looked at her twice. She was a-okay with that. Romi could have the limelight. Geet was happy in her world.

But the problemโ€ฆthe problem was Romi had a tendency to fall into trouble a little too easily. And the person more often than not picking up the pieces was Geet.

โ€œI thought youโ€™d be happy your daughters are getting along.โ€

Her mother snorted. โ€œThere is a reason child that you are stuck with me.โ€

โ€œMother please, we both know Romi would scream, faint and ignore you if you ever went to her.โ€

Her mother laughed. It sounded hollow, like the wind wheezing past an empty elevator shaft. โ€œGeet donโ€™t let her ruin all the progress you have made.โ€

Geet turned on her back, staring at the ceiling. Romi was a taker after all and none of their motherโ€™s fears were baseless. As children, it had been difficult to get out of Romi’s shadow. Maybe she hadn’t tried that hard – she really did hate the limelight. But she had been trying to create her own little light on her side of the stage.

As much as she hated to admit it, her mother was not wrong.

โ€œI promised her mommy,” she said in a small voice, “I promised her Iโ€™ll always be here.โ€

Her mother studied her. If ghosts could cry, she would have had tear-stained cheeks.

Romi’s troubles were always spectacular. This time it was a failed relationship, a relationship Geet had warned Romi about. The result had been a complete cut-off in communication for six months.

Until yesterday.

When Romi turned up on her doorstep, a bag in hand, eyes and nose red, shaking as if she had faced a storm.

Maybe she had. The relationship had gone exactly as Geet had predicted. But there was no sense of victory in the I told you so. In fact, it hadnโ€™t even been uttered. Geet had simply hugged her sister, opened her door wider to allow her in, made her tea, fed her some cold pizza, and put her to bed.

โ€œYou were always too good to her.โ€

Geet shrugged, murmured a goodnight and turned away. She appreciated her mother’s ghost having her back. Even then, she knew one thing. No matter what, sheโ€™d always have her sisterโ€™s back. Because thatโ€™s what families did.


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34 responses to “The promise”

  1. Haimanti Avatar

    A mother will always be a mother, even if she is a ghost now! A beautiful story about sister love and members of a family having each other’s back… Loved everything about your writing…

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    1. You’re very kind. Thanks Haimanti

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  2. She was a Ghost! I mean, what a stupendous twist to the tale! Btw loved the sibling bond ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Thanks Jhilmil.

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  3. Why can’t all ghosts be like this?
    Uhh… I mean, not that all ghosts should become motherly and start fussing over us and feed us food. No no… no.
    Just, not have the gnarly nails and sharp teeth and unkempt hair and a general air of… GAAHHH.
    Honestly, we need nice ghosts.

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    1. Hahaha you know everyone seems to love the mother’s ghost so much it is giving me so many ideas of writing a series with a ghost that is NICE. Why should all ghosts want to suck our soul and sacrifice us in a cemetery at 3.30 AM?

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      1. Ohhh yes, you should! You most definitely should…

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  4. Only you can make a ghost sound cool, Suchita! I missed your writing. I will be back to check out more from you.

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    1. Ha ha ha – that’s so kind of you! Thanks Ritu.

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  5. You kept me hooked till the end. Sisters are your best friends and your secret keepers I feel, the one who always has your back and can rely on you.

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    1. Secret keepers are so true. Thanks Manisha.

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  6. Sisters on apart ends is very well described in the story. I liked how you used Mother as a ghost and not as a person.

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    1. Sisters can get on each other’s nerves but they do love each other in the end. Thanks MeenalSonal.

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  7. I really amazing short story. Anyone get spooky feeling ,if mother is ghossst but I love the story.

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    1. Ha yes mother is a ghost but she is a friendly ghost. Thanks Gurjeet.

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  8. That’s a beautiful story on relationships and I loved the mom a lot.

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    1. Hehehe the Mom is getting a lot of love ๐Ÿ˜€ Thank you Aesha.

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  9. Wow…. Loved the way you peed this story. Felt loved with a chill. Nothing can match sisterly love and moms have the quality of ghosts.. Know everything what’s going around with kids.. Hahaha

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    1. That’s a super way of putting it – loved with a chill. I think that was exactly the point of the story.

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  10. Growing up with my sister, we tried to get even with each other, telling ghostly tales ๐Ÿ˜‰ all the time

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    1. Oh my sister loves to make me watch scary movies because I get scared!

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  11. I can so relate to this tale

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  12. Oh my my she is a ghost. That’s such a turning point an indeed sisters love is the best and most precious

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    1. Yes the mother is a ghost because moms don’t know when to leave their children alone ๐Ÿ˜€ Yup sisters are the best!

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  13. Jyoti Jha Avatar

    Your storytelling is magical Suchita. I was hooked till the end and quite an edge of the seat experience.

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    1. You’re very kind Jyoti. Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

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  14. The bond two sisters have is special, irrespective of how different they are. You’ve highlighted that beautifully, Suchita. And Mom’s, they won’t stop directing the play called their children’s life even from beyond, will they!:))

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    1. Moms are a force to be reckoned with! Thanks Mayuri!

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  15. Oh my goodness! This was such a cool read. Loved the twist in the tale.

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    1. Thanks Preetjyot ๐Ÿ™‚

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  16. I was taken aback when I read that she was a ghost. You know Suchita, this kind of cool chilled ghost reminded me of American Horror Story where the ghosts just hung around appearing sometimes. Sisters are the best:)

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    1. Haha cool chill ghosts should become more mainstream. The horror kind are passe now!

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  17. Sister love! This is a cute story, Suchita. Families indeed have each other’s back. I’m glad though that Mom is on Geet’s side even after passing away. I laughed hard when I realised she was a ghost, btw! ๐Ÿ˜€

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    1. I don’t think Geet’s mother’s ghost would appreciate your hilarity ๐Ÿ˜€ But Geet certainly would ๐Ÿ˜‰ Thanks Varsha!

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