Zindagi Na Milegi Dobara

Chanderi had wanted to give her parents a lavish anniversary party to celebrate their years of togetherness. But considering this was their thirty-second anniversary and not a milestone anniversary, she had planned a small dinner consisting of exactly thirty-two guests.

That bit of symmetry was for her because she enjoyed such things.

She was at one end of the hall she had rented, speaking to the DJ, giving him precise instructions while Chiranjeev was on the other side of it, looking at her. She didnโ€™t know what he hoped to accomplish by his staring but she wasnโ€™t complaining.

What neither of them knew was they were the subject of intense scrutiny of their respective mothers. Mrs. Chudasma was standing near the stage-cum-photo-booth waiting for her daughter to finish her interrogation so they could continue with the rest of the event. Mrs. Bajaj was standing next to her. Both mothers had their arms across their bosom and were looking at their offsprings.

โ€œHow long,โ€ said Mrs. Chudasma with a wince when she saw Chanderi trying to turn at an angle where she would be able to see if Chiranjeev was watching her, โ€œdo you think they will take before they decide to say something to each other?โ€

Mrs. Bajaj sighed as she saw her son grin like a fool, not seeing that a slow drip of nimbu paani was falling on his shoe. โ€œWe may have to intervene. Otherwise, both of us will have white hair by the time they realise theyโ€™re in love and want to marry. Not to think how long theyโ€™ll take to produce grandchildren.โ€

They both shivered at the thought.

โ€œWhat should we do?โ€

โ€œMaybe if we announce theyโ€™re engagedโ€ฆโ€ said Mrs. Chudasma.

Mrs. Bajaj cackled. โ€œI like it but I think it would be too much.โ€ She hummed and after a moment, she said, โ€œI think I will go talk to my son,โ€ and marched towards him, as quickly as she could in her heels and saree.

Once she was standing next to him, she said softly, โ€œBeta, why are you standing here grinning like a monkey? Why aren’t you over there, with Chanderi?โ€

If Chiranjeev was surprised at the question, he didnโ€™t show it. The thing was, he didnโ€™t have an excuse, except for fear that heโ€™ll be rejected again. He did not want to give Chanderi another chance to leave him at the mandap. This time, he wanted her to be sure. And if that meant he had to wait for her to reach where he was, he would do it. Besides, dating wasnโ€™t a hardship. It wasโ€ฆno pressure commitment and he was enjoying himself.

And if the twinkle in Chanderiโ€™s eye was anything to go by, she was enjoying herself too.

Mrs. Bajaj noticed the exchange and raised her hands in defeat. โ€œUff you youngsters. I am so fed up. Let me goโ€ฆโ€

Chiranjeev did not let her finish her statement. He held her hand and said, โ€œMa, she looks so happy. Let her be.โ€

His mother rolled her eyes but he was glad when she dropped it. His relief was short-lived because not a moment later, he saw Mrs. Chudasma approaching Chanderi. What were these old women up to, he thought, looking from his mother to Chanderiโ€™s mother.

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โ€œChanderi, beta, can we start the evening?โ€

Chanderiโ€™s face was flushed. It was getting increasingly difficult to stay on the opposite side of the hall when all she really wanted to do was go to Chiranjeev and ask what latest shenanigans his students had been up to. He had told her they had gone for a picnic and something had happened that had shaken the school. He still hadnโ€™t told her what it was. He said he wanted to tell her face to face so he could see all her reactions.

โ€œBeta, for how long will you keep looking at him? When do you plan to lock him down?โ€

She swivelled to her mother so fast, she got a crick in her neck. Her face was burning now. โ€œItโ€™s nothing like that.โ€

โ€œAre you telling me you donโ€™t care for him?โ€

She took a deep breath. โ€œYou know I do.โ€

โ€œYou are in love with him.โ€

Though she was shaking her head, her mouth said, โ€œYes.โ€

โ€œYouโ€™re scared,โ€ said Mrs. Chudasma. For once, she didnโ€™t sound judgmental. She took her daughterโ€™s hand in hers, squeezing. โ€œAre you worried about what weโ€™ll say?โ€

โ€œNo.โ€ Then she said, โ€œYes.โ€

โ€œOh beta. The day you said you wanted to start your business, I gave up on you. I knew no matter what I said, you would only do what you wanted.โ€

Chanderi laughed. โ€œMamma, that does not help.โ€

โ€œI only mean, you were fearless when you told me you wanted to do designing for a living. What happened to that fearless woman today?โ€

Chanderi stared at her motherโ€™s retreating back in shock and confusion. She saw her extend her hand towards her father as they both stood in the centre of the stage to get their photos clicked. She couldnโ€™t believe her mother had just given her the most brutal pep talk she could have.

But then, that was her mother. Always using a spur to make Chanderi move rather than soft, supportive words. She didnโ€™t know if she appreciated such tough love butโ€ฆshe looked at Chiranjeev, just as he looked at her, and she knew what she had to do.

She walked up to him, not caring that her father was giving a speech behind her. She had written that speech and she was sure she would find some video coverage of it after the party.

โ€œHey, is everythingโ€ฆโ€

She did not give him a chance to say anything more. She simply plopped a kiss on his lips and said, โ€œI am in love with you.โ€

His breath stuttered and his face nearly broke with how wide his grin was. โ€œI love you too.โ€

She sighed happily, reveling in those words. โ€œWeโ€™re not getting married yet. I like where we are. I want to keep doing that.โ€

He cleared his throat as he went to clasp her hand. They intertwined their fingers. โ€œOkay. I amโ€ฆuhโ€ฆgood with that.โ€

โ€œI think I may cry sometime this evening. Just letting you know.โ€

He squeezed her hand, using his other to wipe his cheek. โ€œThanks for the warning. I think I’ll be done by then. You can cry and I’ll bring you icecream.โ€

She nodded, letting go of his hand so she could move closer to him. Her arm went around his waist and his around her shoulder. โ€œGet me the vanilla one.โ€

โ€œDone.โ€

She put her head on his chest. She could feel his heartbeats thundering, before they settled. She understood that at a primal level as she engulfed him in a side embrace, feeling so, so at peace.


Chapter 26 of 26 of the ongoing series Chanderi. You can read all posts here. Written as part of #BlogchatterA2Z.

Thank you for showing your support to this story through your comments, shares and silent lurking. It made this writer so happy.

16 responses to “Zindagi Na Milegi Dobara”

  1. Finally done with reading and I am glad I waited until May… I don’t think I would have had the patience to wait for the posts each day in April.

    What an utterly delightful romance you have written Suchita. I loved the way Chanderi finds her way to her love, and the moms, OMG they were so so cute! And thank you for no proposal/wedding etc at the end, just the acknowledgement of love. It was so refreshing and lovely!

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    1. Thank you for spending your precious time reading my story. So happy to know you enjoyed it ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  2. The side characters, especially moms and Pihu are lovely. Enjoyed reading C&C’s story. ๐Ÿ™‚

    Congratulations on completing the challenge. I like how it does end with the wedding. Though I have to ask. Do you think they go for a big fat wedding or a cozy one with special guests?

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    1. I’m so glad to know this Srivalli! I think they will start by wanting a small wedding but it’ll finally turn into a big fat Indian wedding because they would want to celebrate their union with every obscure relative out there ๐Ÿ˜€

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  3. Haha the moms were truly a joy to read! And okay. I liked this. I liked how it ended. Giving my blessings to C&C. Love stories don’t always have to end up with a mandap setting! And though Chanderi put us through a wringer, she accomplished what complex characters are meant to do: make us feel!!! I ended up liking the ‘Chanderi in love’
    And Chiranjeev… Hopefully he exists in the real world somewhere for us girlies. ๐Ÿคž

    And to you Suchita, congratulations and well done! It was a true romance with swoony moments and I think you definitely proved to ur mum and sister that you can indeed write a romance! I’m always in awe of how smoothly you write words. It flows like water. Thank you for entertaining us!

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    1. Thank you so so much Careena. I’m so happy to know this story made you feel so many things. And, I asked mum if I had passed the test and she said this was good ๐Ÿ˜€

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  4. You can cry and Iโ€™ll bring you icecream.

    such a lovely soul. Well done Mr C.

    She didnโ€™t know what he hoped to accomplish by his staring but she wasnโ€™t complaining.

    Such a lovely line, that brought smile to my face.

    Congratulations on completing this challenge with an emotional tale of C&C. Although it’s a love story, the conversation between Pihu and Chanderi in the later part of the story was my favourite. When a close friend is getting married, we feel like a lost puppy (your analogy for Mr C!). Such a soul stirring emotion and how beautifully you rendered it! Well done!

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    1. Thank you Pandian. I’m glad to know you found the story worthy of returning to my blog every day. Your comments were such a boost ๐Ÿ™‚

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  5. What a happy, mushy and perfect ending ๐Ÿฅน
    As a fan of open ends, this makes me a very satisfied reader ๐Ÿ™‚
    Thank you for making my April fun and hopeful. Thank you for sharing Chanderi and Chiranjeev’s story with us. Thank you for the understanding, non-dramatic, supportive, yet meddling parents ๐Ÿ˜

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    1. Thank you for all your comments and shares. They have made this whole endeavour feel less burdensome. I’m so happy to know you’re satisfied.

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  6. Good to know the relationship status is no longer complicated! HEA!

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    1. Hahaha yesss its indeed a HEA ๐Ÿ™‚

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  7. Aw, I love the moms. I love that they know exactly how to get their children going. What a sweet, warm mushy end. I feel happy. Thank you Suchita.

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    1. Oh my, thank you so much Tulika – I’m so happy to know you’re happy. Bestest compliment โค

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  8. So sweet! But I read only one other letter and this. Loved both!

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    1. Thanks Aishwariya.

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