Where is the bottle?

It was recess. The corridors were filled with cacophony of students screaming from a sugar rush, teachers trying to maintain some discipline without being overbearing and intermittent slaps and ball dribbling.

In the middle of all this noise sat two boys from the sixth grade. They were seeking Radha’s particular brand of expertise to look into a matter for them. They weren’t looking forward to this interchange (they had heard tales of Radha’s oddity) but they were desperate and they needed someone who could get them results.

Radha sat behind the teacherโ€™s desk, feeling a lot like Mogambo. Watson and Timothy were sitting to either side of him. Since they were his sidekicks, it had been their humble but pointless duty to remind him that he wasnโ€™t supposed to sit on the teacherโ€™s chair, a rule the teachers reinforced regularly. And Radha had taken their well-meaning advice and went on to do exactly what he pleased.

Well how would Radha become a detective if he didnโ€™t take risks?

The two sixth grade boys had taken two whole minutes to explain how their third friend, who wasnโ€™t here, had lost his new bottle. Now neither of them cared for this new bottle but after painstakingly taking permission from three set of parents, they had finally been allowed to have a sleepover and watch a movie late into the night. If the parents came to know of this blemish on an otherwise unblemished record, a record in itself for three boys, their night may get cancelled. And theyโ€™d rather die than go through the whole approval process again.

Radha had heard their story, falteringly given because they were so nervous (Radha was after all a legend among the juniors and the glowering faces of Watson and Timothy hadnโ€™t helped), and now was deep in thought.

Seeing the two boys fidgeting, he nodded his head once in Watsonโ€™s and Timothyโ€™s direction. They jumped to attention like a well-oiled machine and ushered the two boys out with promises that boss would get back to them when he had some leads.

โ€œBoss you want to see the crime scene?โ€ asked Mayur, aka Watson. He didnโ€™t know who Watson was and neither did he care. Puberty had still not hit him and he was carrying all the baby fat thanks to his motherโ€™s generous application of ghee on rotis and her conviction that allowing him to do any kind of physical activity would seriously damage his softness.

Radha shook his head. โ€œGo eat your lunch you two. Weโ€™ll talk about this after school.โ€

Thankful and with grumbling stomachs, the two sidekicks made their mock salutes and went on to enjoy a junior’s tiffin they had nicked and the remaining five minutes of break time.

When Mayur and Sagar had left, Radha went back to his desk, thinking of the half-eaten apple. He had methodically gone through the names of each of his twenty-five classmates, including Mayur and Sagar, and had come up surprisingly empty handed. No one, it appeared, had eaten Anjum missโ€™s apple.

And before he had been able to pinpoint a culprit, a bottle had gone missing. Now just a missing bottle may have turned up in its own time. But when that was put together with the half-eaten apple…things started to get murky.

It looked like there was a new thief in Radha’s jurisdiction.


This is the second post in the series. To know more about Radha, click here.

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33 responses to “Where is the bottle?”

  1. this is getting interesting. who could it be? the detective in me is on with the magnifying glass in hand. and of course I can hear the background music. can you?

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    1. Haha. I can hear the pink panther music ๐Ÿ˜‚

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  2. That’s an interesting twist in the tale here. After the bite of an apple, now it’s going to be a missing bottle which needs Radha’s undivided attention! I like the way describe things which can easily hit the chord with any age.

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    1. Thanks Medha for that wonderful compliment!

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  3. Aah, the mystery deepens. But Radha is smart. And what’s a little bit of challenge for him.
    Falling in love with your writing.

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    1. Thanks for the compliment!

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  4. Hmmmโ€ฆ now things are getting seriousโ€ฆ first apple and then bottleโ€ฆ new thief or just a case of misplacing the bottle??? Have to seriously check out Radhaโ€™s next move.

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    1. Hahaha. It could be. Who knows. Not Radha

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  5. Excited to read more, Suchita! I love your subtle sense of humour and the mischief in every description you make! i have a picture of Radha and his sidekicks in my head now, and I am chuckling by myself:)

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    1. So happy to know you’re enjoying Radha’s story ๐Ÿ™‚ thank you for the compliments

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  6. nice read. wondering if you are writing a post a day or have written the story already and posting now!

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    1. Thank you.
      I had written a few posts in advance. Now I try to write one post a day so I have a bank ready.

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  7. The plot thickens with each passing alphabet.

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    rashimital

    I started wondering where is the story going. But it all made sense when finally the half-eaten apple reappeared. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. It’s all connected my dear Watson ๐Ÿ˜‰

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  9. Preeti's Panorama Avatar
    Preeti’s Panorama

    Awesome!!! Slowly but steadily I am being drawn to this world of Radha created by you. The story is so alive as if it is happening around me. Kudos to you…

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    1. You’re too kind Preeti. Thanks!

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    pratikshya2

    I was nodding- the approval process for sleepovers at friends’ is tough. And Radha has so many important matters at hand๐Ÿ˜‚. I am liking this childlike fun.

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    1. I never reached so far in the approval process! So glad you’re enjoying it.

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  11. Now this seems like a big mystery- lets see where it leads to

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    1. I’m waiting to discover too ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  12. The story is moving along really nicely. You are making it seem so easy. Is Radha a short form of the name Radhakrishnan or Radha Ram? I got confused initially. Great going. Shall be back for all your posts.

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    1. I’m glad you’re enjoying the story.
      Radha is an acronym for Rishidhar Arpita Dinanath Hose Agarwal.

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  13. shwetadave Avatar
    shwetadave

    More than the story, I must say, I like how you make the reader relive the school days. I am also loving how the story is progressing. You make this seem so effortless ๐Ÿ™‚ Very well written Suchita.

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    1. This makes me so happy! Thanks a lot

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      1. Radhika Acharya Avatar
        Radhika Acharya

        Yes indeed . Effortless but engaging!! I’m a new fan of yours Suchita. ๐Ÿ™‚

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      2. That’s very kind of you. Thanks Radhika.

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  14. I was confused about Radha being a girl but then I figured it was a story about a boys’ school. Interesting….

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    1. It’s a co-ed school. Girls will make an appearance shortly – hopefully.

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