The message in the feather

The embargo had been lifted. Mayur and Sagar could start playing detective again. No one was happier than Radhaโ€™s dadi. She still nurtured the hope that the two boys would positively influence her grandson and make a man out ofโ€ฆout of whatever he was currently.

If only she knew the influence that Radha had on his sidekicksโ€ฆ

Watson and Timothy were in Radhaโ€™s house on the pretext of a group project. They did have a project to complete but Timothy had assured them that his big sister would complete it for them, no charges. He explained that she needed some points for doing charity and she would add their name in her project. He didnโ€™t careโ€ฆas long as she didnโ€™t tell their parents and they could pass.

โ€œStart from the beginning Tim,โ€ said Radha seriously, right hand on chin, and left hand cupping the right elbow.

Mayur rolled his eyes and nudged Sagar. Despite everything, he thought Radha was alright โ€“ odd most certainly but alright. But he didnโ€™t appreciate the theatrics too much. Worse was when Radha told him he didnโ€™t have it in him to understand the finer nuances of the role of a sidekick. Like he knew what being a sidekick entailed. He didn’t think Radha would survive a day, a day, as a sidekick.

Sagar visibly gulped, looked at Mayur for support and began.

It was a hot afternoon. The time was half past one. All of Sagarโ€™s classmates had been downstairs since it was the forty-five minute free period (a luxury really) before school got over at 2. Sagar had come into the classroom to get his bottle of water.

Ever since that boy from sixth grade had lost his bottle and Radha had become increasingly sure that a thief was among them, he had taken to keeping tabs on his.

Much to his relief, his bottle was still there, just where he had kept it…inside his school bag. He took a welcome drink from it, casually glancing around andโ€ฆ

โ€œCasually? What do you mean casually?โ€ interrupted Radha.

While Mayur sighed tiredly (they had already been over this several times), Sagar explained patiently, โ€œLike I told you I felt I saw something out the corner of my eye andโ€ฆโ€

โ€œWhat? What do you mean corner of your eye? You didnโ€™t tell us that before!โ€

โ€œBut I thoughtโ€ฆโ€

โ€œSagar I have told you this so many times. Every little detail is important.โ€

โ€œI saw something move at the corner of my eyeโ€ฆโ€

โ€œPeripheral vision.โ€

โ€œWhat?โ€

โ€œItโ€™s called peripheral vision.โ€

โ€œHow does that matter?โ€ asked Radha hotly.

โ€œIt doesnโ€™t. Corner of the eye is called peripheral vision,โ€ explained Mayur smugly. He couldnโ€™t believe he knew something that Radha didnโ€™t.

โ€œShut up will you. And stop interrupting Sagar. You will break his flow of thoughts.โ€

โ€œI will breakโ€ฆโ€

โ€œI saw,โ€ Sagar bellowed, โ€œsomething in my peripheral vision and turned to look.โ€ He paused to see if the two would interrupt him. Both of them shrugged so he continued, โ€œI walked over to Radhaโ€™s desk. A feather satโ€ฆโ€

โ€œYou,โ€ bellowed Radha this time in a rare showcase of anger, frustration, irritation and excitement, โ€œsaid nothing about a feather.โ€

Shocked, all Sagar could do was stare at Radha who was red in the face. He giggled nervously then abruptly shut up. โ€œYes but there was a piece of paper below the feather so I threwโ€ฆโ€ his voice trailed off as he saw Radha groan and hold his head.

โ€œIs he okay?โ€ he whispered so only Mayur could hear him.

This time, Mayur had no words of solace to offer his partner. Even he knew, though he was a mere sidekick that Sagar had made a tremendous blunder.

โ€œPlease continue,โ€ said Radha in a tight voice.

Understanding finally dawning, Sagar left nothing out of the tale this time.

It had been the flicker of the feather that had caught his attention. A beautiful brown and black feather the likes of which he had never seen before; not that he had particularly paid attention to feathers before but this one looked beautiful.

He had picked it up and carefully placed it in his math textbookโ€ฆSagar had obviously not thrown it but Radha didnโ€™t need to know that. The feather had been weighed down by a piece of pebble. Under the pebble and the feather had been a note โ€“ a handwritten note that said, โ€˜the game is on.โ€™

Radha studied the note now, so intrigued by the handwriting and the message that he forgot the real clue, the clue that could have helped him identify the thief, was the feather and not the detail of the pebble and the note. But then he was only thirteen and still learning the ropes of this detective business.

โ€œItโ€™s a girl,โ€ declared Mayur triumphantly. โ€œDidnโ€™t I tell you it could be a girl?โ€

โ€œWhy is it a girl?โ€

โ€œLook at the handwriting man. Do you know any boy in the seventh grade who has that good handwriting?โ€

โ€œThat,โ€ said Sagar, thinking of his sister’s handwriting, โ€œcould be the…โ€

The outside noises faded again as Radhaโ€™s focus pinned on the note. He didnโ€™t tell the two bickering boys that the handwriting proved nothingโ€ฆexcept that the thief was clever. Obviously he had asked a girl to write the note just to throw Radha off his scent.

But what did the message mean? How did this boy know Radha was onto him and his thefts? And should Radha now respond to this attack?


This is the sixth post in the series. To know more about Radha, clickย here.

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28 responses to “The message in the feather”

  1. Radhika Acharya Avatar
    Radhika Acharya

    You have a great sense of humour Suchita.

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    1. Thanks Radhika. It’s such a compliment you have read so many posts back to back.

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      1. Radhika Acharya Avatar
        Radhika Acharya

        That was yesterday. I’ve come back for more today…!!! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. Hmmm…jumping the gun – think its either Mayur or Sagar.

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    1. You may or may not right or wrong

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  3. Iโ€™m more interested in the side kicks. Radha is too full of himself.

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    1. Hahahaha glad to see you are enjoying it

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    2. Radhika Acharya Avatar
      Radhika Acharya

      Hahaha!!! Good point. ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

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  4. Have been reading from the beginning and loving it so far. Radha comes across like a combination of Young Sheldon and the Famous Five with a smattering of Holmes thrown in. (Love the nods to Watson and Tim) The plot is not too convoluted, but still manages to keep the reader guessing and that’s a big win. Will read ahead to find the mystery unraveling. Well written, Suchita.

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    1. Thanks Varad. Glad you’re enjoying it.

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  5. Even I have started wondering, why the feature was the clue?

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    1. All in good time

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  6. Oh! Now i am clueless again. I guess the plot is way deeper than i first imagined

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    1. Wah. Thank you. That makes me happy!

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  7. This is getting interesting! Why is the feather the clue? Whose handwriting is it? Whoever wrote it will lead Radha to the culprit. OOhhhh, In am so invested in this now. I am hooked for good. Can we not have all the parts in one day and binge-read like we do it for TV shows? :p Once a day is going to be torture.

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    1. *Suchita has died and gone to writer heaven this is Radha speaking* Hi. See I’m a 13 year old boy who has to study too. Patience is a virtue Ameen miss says.

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      1. ๐Ÿ˜€ Hi Radha. While I am glad to make your acquaintance, and I do love you, please bring Suchita back soon, okay? I want to read the next story. And you sure can’t be trusted to write it yourself. BTW, did you figure out who ate the apple? Why don’t you put in an apple that would help you catch the thief. Paint the apple with indelible ink (red, of course) and whoever is the thief would get caught ‘red-handed’. What say?

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      2. While that sounds like a swell idea, there are a lot of words here I don’t understand. So I’m handing over the controls back to Suchita.
        PS: I don’t think the thief will return to the scene of the crime.

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      3. Hahaha. Okay, all the best for your cases. โค

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  8. shwetadave Avatar
    shwetadave

    i didn’t expect this turn of events. Waiting to see what Radha does next. Will he be sidetracked or go behind the boy instead. Interesting.

    F is Fizz โ€“ Love is not my need

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    1. I’m so happy that you were caught by surprise. I’m doing this story right then!

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  9. Lavanya Avatar

    Radha is one quirky nerd! I am sure he’ll find the thief soon!

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    1. But the question is, will it be the *correct* thief

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      1. Lavanya Avatar

        ๐Ÿ™‚ a lil birdie tells me he will ๐Ÿ™‚

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  10. There are so many wonderful stories.. deserve to be read again and again. Very intriguing ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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  11. This is beginning to get interesting!!

    I feel bad for the sidekicks…and I thought my boss was the worst boss on the planet. Thank you for restoring my faith in the corporate world :p

    Cheers,
    CRD

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    1. Hahahaha glad to be of service!

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