Behind the closed gate

It was after school (because what the students of class VII-B were about to do would never be possible with the teachers and the prefects and Ameen miss and all those people who insist on disciplining thirteen year olds).

Five boys and six girls stood outside the gate whispering to one another. It had seemed like a grand idea to goad each other into entering the derelict house that was adjacent to their school compound and a source of many pranks, stories and dares. But standing in front of it, with a huge sign that screamed private property, and the very real possibility of being chosen to enter it looming over their heads menacingly, everyone was praying hard that they wouldnโ€™t be chosen.

โ€œHow do we choose who gets to go in?โ€ asked one of the boys.

โ€œWe could toss a coin,โ€ said Radha confidently. He wasnโ€™t afraidโ€ฆnot really. Sure he hadnโ€™t approved of this hare-brained idea of entering a house that could potentially fall on their heads but when he had heard that the โ€œDouble Dsโ€ had bowed out of the challenge, he had jumped at the opportunity to prove his mettle.

The assembled boys and girls looked at each other, then at Radhaโ€™s set face and had a collective โ€˜we are in deep shitโ€™ moment of realization. Without having to discuss it, the boy who had asked the question said, โ€œWe donโ€™t need a coin toss. You can go. No one will mind.โ€

Radha snorted and turned to look at the girls, challenging them to back down. One of them rose to the occasion. There was no way she could allow fucking Radha (pardon the French) to one up her. โ€œIโ€™ll go,โ€ she said. As expected, no one tried to stop her either.

When everyone left, after giving their sage warnings, โ€˜all the bestsโ€™ and โ€˜you are stupid,โ€™ Priyanka said, โ€œWe can leave too you know. No one will know if we went inside or not. We can always make up some story. You and I are good at that.โ€

Radha tilted his head to one side, squinting because of the sun. โ€œTell me why you are stealing pencils and maybe Iโ€™ll think about it.โ€

โ€œWhat the fuck are you talking about?โ€

โ€œItโ€™s either that or we go in; your choice.โ€

Priyanka looked at the boy in front of her like he was no bigger than a fly. โ€œWhat will you do if I just walk away?โ€

Radha shrugged. He opened his bag and took a swig from his water bottle. He removed a torch, closed his bag and pushed at the gate. The rusted hinges made a satisfying creak. Pushing with all his strength though, he realized the gates wouldnโ€™t budge. He needed her help. โ€œAre you coming or what?โ€

Priyanka sighed and helped Radha push. Even with their combined force, they were sweating by the time the gate budged far enough for the two of them to squeeze past, their clothes staining with the rusty red and black of gate gunk.

As soon as they entered the grounds, it felt like they had been transported to another world. Both of them instinctively turned around to ensure that the road and the roadside thellas were where they had left them. Feeling reassured seeing and hearing the traffic, they turned back.

The grounds that once must have been sprawling with velvety soft grass were now full of gravel and dust. There was no discernible walkway leading to the house so the two children walked straight, unconsciously moving closer to each other.

Though usually of the curious kind (being a detective and all) Radha could have spent hours in the grounds trying to tease out its secrets but he didnโ€™t. Today, it was the house that beckoned him. Another one of those instincts really that he had learnt to listen to a long time ago.

When they were just a step away from the short flight of stairs leading to the house proper, Radha stopped.

โ€œThere is nothing to detect here,โ€ said Priyanka. She would have said more but she realized she was whispering and she didnโ€™t like the idea of showing fear.

โ€œIโ€™m trying to listen,โ€ he whispered as he closed his eyes and cocked his head to one side. The house his grandparents used to live in before they had moved in with him had been a similarly old house. And as old houses go, they had personalities of their own. Radha was simply trying to hear what this house was telling him.

โ€œYou are a psycho, you know that right?โ€

โ€œAnd you are a thief.โ€

โ€œYou have no proof,โ€ she said triumphantly. โ€œDonโ€™t the likes of you need evidence?โ€

โ€œYou donโ€™t have proof either,โ€ muttered Radha, miffed that his thief accusations had brought no confessions from his culprit. Whenever Mr. Holmes said those words, the culprit would either run or breakdown and confess to all their sins. Why wasnโ€™t Priyanka doing the same?

โ€œAnyways letโ€™s go inside. I canโ€™t hear anything because you wonโ€™t shut up.โ€

He climbed the stairs and was pleased when she followed him. He may not be scared but he wasnโ€™t stupid. Though he didnโ€™t believe the house was haunted, there was safety in crowd. Besides, didnโ€™t Mr. Holmes always take his trusted sidekick wherever he went?

He also now had time to work on her guilt and get a confession. All in all it was a wonderful situation to be trapped in.

โ€ฆto be continued.


This is the seventh post in the series. To know more about Radha, clickย here.

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21 responses to “Behind the closed gate”

  1. Radhika Acharya Avatar
    Radhika Acharya

    “Pardon the French…..” Hahahahahaha!! Classic one!!

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  2. I am very curious to know why the house beckoned Radha. I wonder if Priyanka will have a change of heart when it comes to Radha at the end of this haunted house epsiode…

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    1. Well there’s definitely something brewing. Loving your comments. Makes me feel like you’re really spending time in reading. Thank you for that.

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  3. Teenage crush or what? I am liking the way the story is unfolding

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    1. Haha kids these days

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  4. You have quite a mind of a spy. Love it how you are developing the character. Have missed some posts, Shall read after kid’s exams (13th).

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    1. Haha thanks for the compliment. It’s good to know all those years spent watching and reading crime thrillers is paying off. Thank you for stopping by

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  5. That’s quite an intriguing mystery story. Loved the fact that it involves school students. Will read the second part now.

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    1. Glad you’re enjoying it Anurag

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  6. Have to say I did clutch at some imaginary pearls when the first F-bomb dropped ๐Ÿ˜‚ This has become super intriguing, and nice pacing too! Also, in the interest of full disclosure: I am a sucker for anything set in school and anything to do with detectives, so, double bingo

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    1. Haha thank you!
      Oh the f bomb. Still remember when my sister learnt it, in school from her classmates. They did an intervention for her when they realized she didn’t know what it meant. All this while my mother (their teacher) and I (also their teacher) were around somewhere.

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  7. Loved it! Headed off to read the previous stories. And would be sure to come back for more!

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    1. Thank you. Happy to have you back and give this story one more shot!

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  8. Hahahaha! Toss a coin!!! Hahahahah!

    If poker-faced comedy could be put on webspace, this is the best example to look for it.

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    1. Again with the kindness. Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

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  9. shwetadave Avatar
    shwetadave

    Wow! Wonder what they will encounter in the house and what will unfold next ๐Ÿ™‚ Staying tuned.

    G is Games โ€“ Love is not my need

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  10. Wow, a story series, glad I bumped on it.

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    1. Thanks for reading!

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