I fixed it


PHOTO PROMPT ยฉ Dale Rogerson

โ€œChristmas tree, my Christmas tree…โ€

โ€œSonny, what are you doing?โ€ asked Mother seeing the boy perched on a stool, taping the broken glass. โ€œWho did that? Are you hurt?โ€

โ€œDon’t worry mommy. Billy was trying to get in. But I fixed it.โ€

Sonnyโ€™s intense concentration on the task at hand was disconcerting. โ€œWho’s Billy?โ€ Mother asked gently.

Sonny smiled like he wasnโ€™t all there. โ€œBilly the bully mommy.โ€

A chill ran down her spine as she stared beyond the broken glass. โ€œAre you sure? Billy…but Billy…”

โ€œI know mommy. And now, he can’t come inside. See I fixed it.โ€


Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. The idea is to write a 100-word story on a photo prompt. You can read the other stories here.

25 responses to “I fixed it”

  1. Dear Suchita,

    Something’s getting ready to happen or has happened? Chilling.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. I think something has already happened and what happens next remains to be seen. Thank you Rochelle for your kind words.

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  2. gahlearner Avatar
    gahlearner

    I join the chorus: this is very creepy. Well done.

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    1. Thanks so much ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. Something chilling going on here! Nicely done. ๐Ÿ™‚
    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

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    1. Thanks for the compliment Susan!

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  4. Delightfully creepy!

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    1. Thanks Amie.

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  5. Hope that’s just a child’s imagination – kids tend to make up imaginary friends! If not, I am surely creeped!

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    1. Billy is definitely not an imaginary friend. At least that was the initial thought. Who knows what Sonny can see. Thanks for reading Anshu.

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  6. Oooh, this is a bit creepy. Good though!

    Click to read my FriFic tale!

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    1. Haha yes I got quite the chills while writing. Thanks Keith.

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  7. A lot left unsaid and we are left to wonder. Something disturbing below the surface. Excellent tale!

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    1. Thank you Brenda. There’s definitely something brewing.

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  8. Kalpana Solsi Avatar
    Kalpana Solsi

    Shivers down my spine . Sonny saw what momโ€™s eyes couldnโ€™t.

    https://ideasolsi65.blogspot.com/2019/01/door.html

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    1. Thanks Kalpana. Glad you enjoyed it.

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  9. Something a little chilling about this tale!

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    1. Yay glad you could feel that! Thanks for reading.

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  10. Shivers down my spine ….

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    1. Thank you. Glad it had that effect ๐Ÿ˜ฌ

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  11. Nice story Suchita

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    1. Thanks Kurian

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      1. You are welcome Suchita

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  12. Oh! Children are so innocent. With time Sonny will learn the ways of the world.

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    1. Oh one can never be sure what children see, or don’t see. Thanks for reading ๐Ÿ™‚

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