Contract

Contract

Kilney takes in the quality of the thick white paper, the bold black ink and the absence of a letterhead. It doesn’t necessarily make a contract void but he finds it curious that Ramshackle’s business doesn’t have a name. Maybe otherworldly beings don’t have to bother with things like logos, registration or licenses.

It’s a one-page contract. The language is simple to understand. It says: the signee recognizes that they are forfeiting their life for a chance to spend twenty-four hours living their heart’s truest desires. It further confirms that the signee is not under duress.

Kilney is…disappointed. He says, pushing the contract back towards Ramshackle, “This seems straightforward.”

Ramshackle inclines his head in acknowledgment.

“What I don’t understand is why Gimby would do this. We were happy. We were engaged for two years and not once during that time did she voice any complaint. Tomorrow…”

At the prick of tears, Kilney turns away. He cannot, will not, cry in front of a man wearing a better suit than him. “It’s our wedding tomorrow. Everyone has arrived. People have travelled from all over the country to wish us well. I don’t…why is this happening to me?”

The house whispers in Ramshackle’s ears, offer him a chance to understand. This is what we have been looking for mellon. He is the key.

The message makes Ramshackle shiver in fear and anticipation. Are you sure? Will it be safe?

He feels the house’s exasperation. It is disconcerting how human the house acts sometimes.

What are you afraid of? You’re immortal.

Ramshackle wants to roll his eyes but instead says, “Would you like to understand why a seemingly happy girl, on the brink of getting married to her beloved, would sign away her life to me for living her deepest desires for twenty-four hours?”

The way he puts it, so baldly, makes Kilney sound pathetic. But he needs to know. That’s why he’s here instead of outside Gimby’s house, demanding explanations from her like the rest of her family.

Kilney straightens and nods.

“You may not get the answers you’re hoping for,” he cautions.

The warning is ominous and Kilney finds himself unable to speak. So, he shrugs.

“I’ll need verbal consent Mr. Kilney before we begin.”

He wonders what Ramshackle’s motivation in all this is. He had thought this would be difficult, that he’d have to convince Ramshackle but it’s been too easy, so far.

“I give my consent.”

“Don’t say I didn’t warn you,” says Ramshackle, extending his hand, to seal the deal.

Kilney takes his hand for a firm shake and notes Ramshackle’s is devoid of any lines. It makes him gulp, wondering just what he has agreed to.


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20 responses to “Contract”

  1. Oooh! No lines in the hand?!

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  2. I’m intrigued to see what happens in the next 24 hours!!!

    Don’t say I didn’t warn you

    The prelude has me on the edge of my seat, eager for next chapter.

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    1. That’s kind of you, thank you

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  3. Deepti Menon Avatar
    Deepti Menon

    Gosh, this premise reminds me of Dr. Faustus and his deal with the devil. Whatever Kilney is involved in sounds shadowy!

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    1. So interesting. Let me check this out.

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  4. Really, even I want to know. Why 24 hrs with Ramshackle, cancelling a wedding!

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    1. All will be revealed 🙂

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  5. The consent has been given and the mystery is set to be revealed layer by layer. Seems like we’re gonna learn more about Gimby over the next new episodes 🙂

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    1. Less about Gimby and more about Kilney I’d say.

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  6. Ah! The plot thickens! Like Kilney I want to know to!

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    1. Haha – this mystery will be revealed 🙂

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  7. “Would you like to understand why a seemingly happy girl, would sign away her life for living her deepest desires for twenty-four hours?”

    I think that line is going to resonate with a lot of readers and suddenly even I find myself thinking, “Is that so bad?” coz how many times have we wished we’d do anything just to get 24 hours to do whatever we want to do.

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    1. Yessss it’s easy to judge but sometimes, you do need such 24 hours.

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  8. Lovely reading Suchita

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    1. Thank you 🙂

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  9. There’s an intriguing, almost otherworldly aura around Mr. Ramshackles that makes him captivating. Kilney, on the other hand, has my sympathies—it remains to be seen whether he truly regrets his decision.

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    1. That’s a great observation on Ramshackle – thank you!

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  10. Srivalli Rekha Avatar
    Srivalli Rekha

    And… the stage is set! Simple contracts have fewer loopholes. 😀

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    1. That’s true 😀

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