Emotional Outburst

Emotional Outburst

Kilney is aping a fish quite well at the moment. The story he has heard is so implausible and yet every day, his head is spinning and he has broken out into cold sweat.

He’s trying to understand why he’s so discomfited. It takes him a moment. The story he heard has been delivered to him in a monotone, with no inflections to speak of.

“What is this supposed to teach me?” he asks.

He’s in desperate need of sugar to arrest the shock his system seems to be experiencing. To his chagrin, a cool glass of lemonade appears before him almost instantaneously. He wishes it was whiskey but gulps down it nonetheless.

Ramshackle tries to get a read on Kilney. The house may have no trouble catering to his whims but for Ramshackle, reading the man is proving difficult. As someone whose very trade depends on his ability to read people and provide for their desires, he finds it unsettling.

He says once Kilney has finished sucking every drop of lemonade from the glass, “It’s supposed to teach you that I did not force Gimble to sign the contract. She did it of her own free will.”

“See,” he says, still holding the glass. It is solid in his hand. He does not know why that information is vital but it is. It tells him this isn’t entirely happening in his head. It is real, as strange as that sounds. “I don’t agree. You tell someone you can deliver on their desires, that in itself is coercion.”

“How so?”

Kilney flails the glass in his hand and drops it. It rolls off the carpet and clinks on the hardwood floor. It doesn’t break but disappears. He blinks, shakes his head and turns back to the man in front of him. He tries to picture him in a burgundy suit but is unable to do so. Gimby had always said to him that he was bad at differentiating colours. Maybe if Ramshackle told him what burgundy stood for…he could picture it.

He shakes his head. What were they talking about? Right. Coercion.

“Everyone wants their desires fulfilled. And if someone says to you that they can help without you having to deal with the consequences of those desires being made public, that’s a hell of a sales pitch. No one can resist it.”

Ramshackle frowns. “It’s not a sales pitch. I don’t advertise. People who need my services find me.”

Kilney laughs. He knows it sounds hysterical but he cannot help himself. To his horror, tears spring to his eyes once again and before he can give them permission or turn away, they roll down his face, soaking into his collar. 

“Perhaps,” says Ramshackle carefully, “you’re asking the wrong question.”

Seeing him unperturbed by the tears, Kilney gets angry. The other option is curling into a ball of sobs and Ruidan Kilney does not cry. He jumps from the chair when he sees another glass materialize out of thin air onto the table. This time, he picks it up and throws it. It shatters with a loud bang but it gives him no satisfaction.

Ramshackle does not bat an eye at the show of violence. He says, as polite as ever, “Perhaps the right question Mr. Kilney is, what about you could Gimble no longer tolerate.”

He opens his mouth to speak but a sob tears through his throat instead. He slaps a hand on his mouth and runs out. The house removes all furniture from his path to aid his mad dash.

He is bawling now…heartbroken. Where he’s headed, he does not know. But he knows he cannot look at Ramshackle’s blank face any longer.


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24 responses to “Emotional Outburst”

  1. Ah poor poor Kilney! How deeply he feels!

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    1. He is confused, poor chap.

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  2. Kilney’s agitation was effectively conveyed. The narration style is rich, making the reading experience quite enjoyable. Keep it going. All the best.

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  3. I’m beginning to feel sorry for Kilney. I hope he finds some answers.

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    1. He will – better than he could have hoped 😀

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  4. the plot thickens. Nice reading this series Suchita 🙂

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    1. Thank you!

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  5. Men! Always running away from self-introspection! Good on you, Mr Ramshackle! Ask more questions!

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    1. Ask more questions: this should be a mantra.

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  6. I absolutely love the names you have given your characters. I stumbled upon this post first. Now will go looking for the first. Kilney venting and Gimpy just listening is epic!

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    1. Thank you – I love the names too 😀

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  7. isn’t that all or at least most of us, really? Asking the wrong questions, not being satisfied with the answers life hands us. Sigh! I see why Kilney isn’t able to face the truth cuz he’s just not able to see or accept his fault in all of this

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    1. Very true – there is still some growing up that Kilney needs to do.

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  8. Kilney is becoming a bit clearer now. let’s see what’s next

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    1. So happy to know you’re getting a hang of his character 🙂

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  9. This piece hit like a wave, quiet at first, then overwhelming. Ramshackle’s eerie calm against Kilney’s unraveling made for such a compelling contrast. Eager to know what’s next!

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    1. That’s such an interesting observation. Thank you 🙂

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  10. This is a cute one, especially the ending.

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    1. Thanks Vidhya

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  11. Srivalli Rekha Avatar
    Srivalli Rekha

    Ohhh… the cracks are widening.

    I’m curious about how you came up with the names. They are quirky and cute. 🙂

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    1. Thank you – I spend a lot of time coming up with them 😀

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  12. Deepti Menon Avatar
    Deepti Menon

    Is the emotional side of Kilney coming out? The suspense grows…

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    1. Absolutely, he is very much human and hurting.

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